Tuesday, July 19, 2011

Dandelions





The roots run deep under the summer rains
The yellow heads rising as the water drains
For a young girl walking casually by to see
And pick up and take with her for company

She happily skipped down that summer lane
And put them in a vase by her window pane
But her mother despised the voracious weed
For she had spent all spring purging every seed

So out the window those flowers were cast
Yet those bright petals were meant to last
For just then came by a love smitten boy
Who to conquer hearts would use every ploy

He grabbed the flowers and ran to the city square
To present them to the girl with the auburn hair
But this time she wasn't such an easy catch
And ran after the boy like a wild wretch

So there the dandelions somberly lay
Over a stone monument on a hot summer day
The innocence of youth for the world to see
And pick up and take along for company

Thursday, July 14, 2011

Round Again





Circles the hawk its prey
Wings on wind round again
Like the sunrise every day
Night and day round again

Begins summer anew
Seasons turn round again
Like the sky from black to blue
Dark and light round again

Run the hands on the face
The clock ticks round again
Like the stars' eternal race
Across the sky round again

Rises the tide to land
Waves crashing round again
Like cyclones in the sand
The moon comes round again

Circles life its new prey
Cycles start round again
Like the sunset every day
Birth and death round again

Musinca Linguistica




Parimune Etoris
A symposium and repository of semantic roots formed through the exploration of phonetic aesthetics

By Torinne Victoria Edelman


Prologon Codicis

Henceforth this opus shall be periodically and perpetually extended and altered as innately it exists as a creation in progression in simile with life itself. Perhaps even if this necessitates function following form with the intention of exploration through trial and error and beautification through refinement. Metalogistically, every level of this universe of thought conforms to a fractal structure of aesthetics.

From our scientific knowledge, it can be assumed that phonemes are the most basic elements of language that are aesthetically relevant. Therefore this work will consider the aesthetic values of phonemes first, and then focus on morphemes, clauses, sentences, poems/prose, and corpora operis, respectively. From this pattern, the external ends of this hierarchy can be extrapolated.

Ultimately, it is paramount to create a fractal of aesthetics that is internally transcendent. However logical this must be, its growth must be organic. For the automation of a process intended to reveal aesthetics is theoretically impossible. Furthermore, the aesthetics of organics supersedes that of mechanics. Thus embarks this opus magnum towards a goal that is only manifested in its pursuit.


Capitulum Prime: Revelatia Phonemica

The most aesthetic termination for morphemes are vowels and sonorant consonants. From the exemplary root tor are derived these forms that represent both terminal aesthetics and classical combinations.

Root
Tor

Vowel Terminations
Tora
Torah
Tore
Tori
Toro
Toru

Multi-Vowel Terminations
Torai
Toria
Torio

Primary Consonant Terminations
Toram
Toran
Torang
Toras
Torath
Torax (acta)

Secondary Consonant Terminations
Toral
Torar
Torash

Classical Terminations
Tora
Torica
Toris
Toron
Toros
Torum
Torus

Modern Terminations with Silent E
Torane
Torene
Torine
Torone
Torune
-me, -se, -le, -re

Modern Semantic Terminations
Toreau
Torie
Torinne
Torique
Torita


To elaborate on some of these forms, the primary consonant terminations are generally more aesthetic than the secondary terminations, technically all the classical forms follow previously set rules, and the silent E terminations with the letter N are more aesthetic than those with the letters M, S, L, and R. Additionally, the letter I can be replaced with the letter Y with the same pronunciation between consonants without loss of visual aesthetic value. Phonemes that are aesthetically appropriate in other parts of a morpheme are as follows in general order of aesthetic value:

T
K
Ch (as in CHemical)
Dh (as in feaTHer)
Zh (as in viSion)
Qu
V
Y
W
D
Kh (as in baCH)
J
Ch (as in CHarm alternatively spelled Ti, C, and Tsh)
P
Ph
B
G
Z


Capitulum Secondarium: Revelatia Morphemica

Now that rules of aesthetics concerning phonemes have been formed, the process of building a corpus of morphemes can be commenced. These morphemes are basic roots that are semantically relevant, and will be divided into numerous categories. When these categories are adequately populated, they will form a catalog that can be used as a reference when building conlinguistic vocabularies. Therefore this is the next step in creating a language that is organically aesthetic on multiple levels down to its core phonology.

The following is the notation that will be used to describe various phonemes:

? - A, E, I, O, U
@ - A, Ah, Ai, Ia, Io, + ?
% - I, U, W, Y
$ - M, N, Ng, S, Th, X-Ct (X changes to Ct if followed by a vowel)
# - L, R, Sh
< - T, P, K , Qu, Ch > - D, B, G
/ - Dh, V, J, Zh, Z
\ - Ph, Ch, Kh

The following are sets of morphemes ordered by aesthetic value within complexity that include the variable symbols and an example of the morpheme:

Set I
? - A

Set II
?$ - Am
?# - Al

Set III
$@ - Ma
#@ - La
%@ - Wa
>@ - Ta
<@ - Da
/@ - Dha
\@ - Pha

Set IV
$?$ - Man
#?$ - Lan
%?$ - Wan
>?$ - Tan
<?$ - Dan
/?$ - Dhan
\?$ - Phan
$?# - Mal
#?# - Lal
%?# - Wal
>?# - Tal
<?# - Dal
/?# - Dhal
\?# - Phal

Set V
$?$@ - Mina
#?$@ - Lina
$?#@ - Mila
#?#@ - Lila
%?$@ - Wina
%?#@ - Wila
>?$@ - Tina
>?#@ - Tila
<?$@ - Dina
<?#@ - Dila
/?$@ - Dhina
/?#@ - Dhila
\?$@ - Phina
\?#@ - Phila

Set VI
?$?$ - Amin
?#?$ - Alin
?%?$ - Awin
?>?$ - Atin
?<?$ - Adin
?/?$ - Adhin
?\?$ - Aphin
?$?# - Amil
?#?# - Alil
?%?# - Awil
?>?# - Atil
?<?# - Adil
?/?# - Adhil
?\?# - Aphil

Set VII
$?$?$ - Minath
#?$?$ - Linath
$?#?$ - Milath
#?#?$ - Lilath
%?$?$ - Winath
%?#?$ - Wilath
>?$?$ - Tinath
>?#?$ - Tilath
<?$?$ - Dinath
<?#?$ - Dilath
/?$?$ - Dhinath
/?#?$ - Dhilath
\?$?$ - Phinath
\?#?$ - Philath
$?$?# - Minar
#?$?# - Linar
$?#?# - Milar
#?#?# - Lilar
%?$?# - Winar
%?#?# - Wilar
>?$?# - Tinar
>?#?# - Tilar
<?$?# - Dinar
<?#?# - Dilar
/?$?# - Dhinar
/?#?# - Dhilar
\?$?# - Phinar
\?#?# - Philar

Sets VIII and IX can be formed by prefixing ? and suffixing @ to set VII respectively. The terminations ane and anne are respectable variations of an in ?$ to ?$($)e and ?# to ?#(#)e form. It is also possible to add certain consonants from the $ and # groups and vowels from the % group to other consonants to create complex phoneme clusters like in astrix and apios.

...opus in perpetual state of creation with later capituli to follow periodically

Saturday, July 2, 2011

Simple Things





Adores my heart simple things
Not sparkling diamonds nor golden rings
But a soft word said with a tear
A winter far, a warm fire near

Needs my body simple things
Not giant's legs nor eagle's wings
But resolve when times grow tough
When mere strength is not enough

Intrigues my mind simple things
Not drama and the pain it brings
But joys of life that pass us by
A misty rainbow, a firefly

Yearns my soul for simple things
Not hansom princes nor noble kings
But a pure character that endures
Immune to greed and lustful lures

Turns my world with simple things
Not war and the lives it stings
But a quiet song in the dark of night
A whispered poem under the moon's light

The Summer Air





In the summer air, life blooms
Each breath to our soul like rain to flowers
Thinking of his golden hair, love looms
Now will I be whole under the evening showers

The trees grow green as the wind blows
The breeze now warm, the sky blue
Never will be seen those icy snows
Outside a dorm, a world made anew

So I step again outside my door
I will give love yet another try
What has been will be no more
When I look above, I will not cry

For dawns now a brand new day
A new start for a tired mind
I don't know how I found the way
But his heart is not hard to find

In the midnight air, life blooms
Each breath to our soul, sunshine to flowers
Holding his golden hair, love looms
Now will I be whole under the morning showers

Thursday, June 30, 2011

Wilted The Rose





Wilted, the rose beneath my feat
Jilted, my heart as I walk the street
Lonely wandering
Quietly pondering
Cleaved to the endless road evermore

Carved, my will down to a thread
Starved, my soul as I still tread
The past calling
The present falling
Yoked to the gloomy fate evermore

Sings, yet a light steadily yond
Rings, yet a voice from beyond
For it walking
Never talking
Bound to follow blindly evermore

Cries, with a seductive song
Lies, with sonnets sweet and long
To it going
Envy growing
Shackled to the luster evermore

Wilted, the hope as pound my feat
Jilted, my future as I walk in defeat
Lonely wandering
Quietly pondering
Cleaved to the endless road evermore

Monday, June 27, 2011

Welcome To Torinne's Blog!

Greetings, darlings, my name is Tori and welcome to my blog! =) I'm not so sure about what I'll do with this yet, but I'll be probably posting any beautiful or breathtaking photos I find in my journeys across the web, tell all my readers my three cents about various topics, and maybe post some of my own poetry and prose if I feel up to it. Thank you so much for stopping by, and I hope that you'll enjoy your time here!

Love,

Tori <3 xoxo